Topic: The sisters short story
June 16, 2019 / By Daley Question:
I just finished my short story (15 pages long, 5711 words long)
It involves a girl called Sapphira and a boy names Ivory who meet. Sapphira is pregnant and Ivory, who is all rich and **** takes care of her. The babies are born (They are twins) and yeah... they are called Azure and Aubin.
Then Ivory and Sapphira decide to get married. So Ivory introduces Sapphira to his parents and it turns out that Ivory's dad was the guy who raped Sappira and is the father of Azure and Aubin and that Ivory and Sapphira are actually brother and sister... :( i read too much V.C Andrews. Anyway, Sapphira and Ivory are too much in love to care so they elope with the children and start a new life together.It's more complex than this but this is just a brief summary. What should the title be???? !!!!
Austen | 7 days ago
I dont see how they are brother and sister? I can see that the kids are Ivory's brother and sister, but not the two of them. As for a title, since you have a lot of color to the names you could call it Jewels or something with jeweltones