Topic: How to write a poem for your mom
June 17, 2019 / By Gabi Question:
I never did understand,
how someone could hurt you,
with sharp words,
I kind of think you're perfect,
I guess that comes,
from you being just like me,
so strangely the same.
We are identical,
you're to thin,
I'm to fat.
The oxymoronic contradictions,
"I won't take you to dance unless you eat",
"your eating to much".
Those words berating against your impressionable ears,
slicing up your already frightfully shattered heart,
you are reaching for your shinny blade,
to cut away the pain...
Daryl | 6 days ago
you sure do kow how to write well good job, thank you for sharing, how about a happy poem =) even if you have to pretend , it could help you to not feel as sad as you do and please give your mom a hug ok, she loves you and I care that you do not feel well.
I've got to say this has a powerful message and was very creatively
written, format as well. Am sure you could refine this, and I would,
cause this one is a winner. Congrats.