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What do you think of my new poem?

What do you think of my new poem? Topic: How to write a poem for your mom
June 17, 2019 / By Gabi
Question: -Sophie- I never did understand, how someone could hurt you, with sharp words, and, snide comments. I kind of think you're perfect, but, I guess that comes, from you being just like me, so strangely the same. We are identical, although, you're to thin, and, I'm to fat. The oxymoronic contradictions, of, "I won't take you to dance unless you eat", and, "your eating to much". Those words berating against your impressionable ears, and, slicing up your already frightfully shattered heart, until, you are reaching for your shinny blade, to cut away the pain... (r.b) Thanks :)
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Daryl Daryl | 6 days ago
you sure do kow how to write well good job, thank you for sharing, how about a happy poem =) even if you have to pretend , it could help you to not feel as sad as you do and please give your mom a hug ok, she loves you and I care that you do not feel well.
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Daryl Originally Answered: I want to share with you the first poem I have ever written.My very badly, written poem.comments?
I still want to take you in my arms and tell you that it will be alright, I remember. you are an artist and you will continue to be one, I am glad you came here to be with us, I for one am blessed to have found you. I wish I could share my first written poetry with you, it is all gone paper disintegrates and in the house in Texas I found a lot of papers moldy and unsalvageable.
Daryl Originally Answered: I want to share with you the first poem I have ever written.My very badly, written poem.comments?
You are so talented. I know I've said that before. This is a deep meaningful poem, it may be a different style than you use now but it is so good to me. Drown my soul in wash of sorrow. Build my doubts and leave me hallow. You know I adore you. I wish I could open up the way you do.
Daryl Originally Answered: I want to share with you the first poem I have ever written.My very badly, written poem.comments?
It's so inspiring to see the way that you say poetry has impacted your life! The poem's way impressive for a first poem, and it's better than anything I wrote at your age. May you continue to develop and grow as a poet and person : )

Breeda Breeda
I've got to say this has a powerful message and was very creatively written, format as well. Am sure you could refine this, and I would, cause this one is a winner. Congrats.
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Breeda Originally Answered: What do you think of my new poem?
you sure do kow how to write well good job, thank you for sharing, how about a happy poem =) even if you have to pretend , it could help you to not feel as sad as you do and please give your mom a hug ok, she loves you and I care that you do not feel well.
Breeda Originally Answered: What do you think of my new poem?
I've got to say this has a powerful message and was very creatively written, format as well. Am sure you could refine this, and I would, cause this one is a winner. Congrats.

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